No one can step on my turf

summer you sound so whack talkin that crap
all you do is try to perk but you just make me go zerk
your pussy ass rhymes aint shit dont try me before you get split
my lyrics are original dont hate suck my dick and appreciate
your the softest person here dont try me i will murder you
and send your ass to the zoo
your softer then butter asking dudes for their numba
im telling you dont post up saying that you can rap
because all you do is make yourself look like crap!

ha str dude seen.

str dude why u tryna act sick starh
ill ride your mum blud stamp on her face liek say shes a kick starh
and i dont know wt ur on blud ill piss on ur grave
take my phone out send ur mum a picture
str dude please dont cat bars ill be in ur afce jus liek fake tits
u cant dub me because ur level aint stepping up there to the basics
u and ur boys can go suk off the same shit
str dude ha kno tht am sending
ur mum looks like a beats shes a hench thing
cums bak he shud kno tht ill end him

make k0 you cant rhyme you need to get a life
you dont make sence and you you need a knife
go kill yourself thats what you need
i want you to bleed bleed bleed
and momma jokes are played out
im going to annihilate you until you pout
im tired of posers they make me sick
all your rhymes equal shit
you try to represent but you cant even rhyme
you sound so sad your dad even gets mad
get a life noob ill cough you up like the swine flu
im telling you don't mess with str dude
you will get owned and wont be the same dude
my lyrics will kill you and thats all i got to say
you will get owned by the whiteboy another day

Yo chill hoes
we dont any more
Shut the fuck up or it will be a popo
Nono for ur mum 2nite
Big fat steamy shit
Down her fucking green pussy clit

So im warnin you, shut ur bin
Or ill come around ur house like tin tin
Toe knee shin
Straight up ur pussy hole


Now thats a sin.


2 MINS.

Guess what know tht this kids back
merking str dude kno tht i did that
str dude why did u start with ur bars
shit track am guna spit back
str dude str dude uve never bin a dan
ur mum blud shes just a fat twat
shes got genital warts like slags have
her legs are open quick close um because std's in a back draft
no that s h o w times back lads

sick too many styles spit fire bars then i go wild
got a bag of bars man got a mile
str dude hes just a wase man ill merk him of at 14 trails
clash me ur guna loose it
i spit right now to prove hes my target

im show time tht is the name tht i go by

fuck str dude?

'str dude str dude uve never bin a dan?
ur mum blud shes just a fat twat
shes got genital warts like slags have''
(doesnt rhyme at all)


(and wtf does this mean)?
''str dude hes just a wase man ill merk him of at 14 trails
clash me ur guna loose it
i spit right now to prove hes my target''



worst person ive ever seen even try to rap.....

this aint rap this is uk grime
its about my flo something ull never have look at ur marger selff in tht pic go cat sum more bars of wbesites.

jai knows what uk grime is and he has flow...you on the other hand dont have shit.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I see all of you immature fools wrapping your dicks off,
I'm the real MVP around here. All you little nerds and shit
go cry to your mommies cause you no match for my words,
their warp your minds, their twist your little tidy whities.
You lucky your safe behind your little computer, If I found
where yaz live Ill go up in your face and pop the fuck out of you,
So don't be steppin' and don't hate on me or I'll pop a can in ya assez',
Ya I"m 12 yrs old, but you need to respect it, at least I don't rub my dick,
you son of bitches...

Peace

str dude stop with ur chit chat ill keep posting verse after verse of dub tracks on you dik hed
and if anyone marrly wants this?

Your kidding, listen to these guys sounding like lyrical disasters, grab a paper and pen and take some notes from the master.
You guys can't rap, so stop, you don't flow so don't try to show.

Now you bitches don't be crazy
going against me? can't phaze me.
and by the way you flow, you look a lil lazy.
I done beat these rappers and now your next.
now please stop thinking you got rhymes it's nothin but broken lines.

It could never add up to mine cuz my rhymes are the best you can find don't hate cuz I'm known all around town
And you dont have to frown cuz im wearin a crown .

Now fix up look sharp don't let me ever see you hitting back you narc.

Look at these fools trying to rap
all they can do is talk smack
I got no wife but the wife be my girlfriend
These fools are like oo snap
1,2,3,4 i come up with the crap
What u sayin bro im talkin smack
This shit is done look at u fools,
This is my town like that
str dude jinrake all dem hoes
Come up with some real smack
Like these niggahz thinkin they can rap
all they can do is talk crap
Omfg i just told u hoes some smack
Lets see comebacks about that.

Niice you illiterate fools

that was supposed to be freestyle rap? it just sounded like a fat kid gasping for air..

well i think Pking terms_Mn was the best but imma enter myself

yo
your too wack to compete
your damn lyrics aint even complete
my rap game is neat
so go ahead and take a seat
watch my show
y'all gonna feel me when i feel da flow
dont make my minds blow
im here to bring hip-hop
bigger than str_dude hoe
your spits are so slow
that make me say whoa
your not in my league, your way too below
your career is 100% trash
my raps are probably quicker than the runnin of steve nash
do i make my self clear?
dont make me get too high for you, queer
this is my year
some people hatin on me
cuz my raps include racism
and dont worry
this will be no more plagiarism
this is the end of all
go ahead sent this to yo friend
dont piss me off again or ill start a brawl
worse than the pacers and ron artest
i hope you dont get too stressed, god ill be blessed

That was quite good, but it sounded like a poem :p You should make it a bit more complex, you had rhymes like Spits are so slow- make me say whoa.

Try discrete rhyming, e.g My favorite line was

Code:

some people hatin on me
cuz my raps include racism
and dont worry
this will be no more plagiarism

No one's perfect mine's quite rubbish too, practice makes perfect

This shit is timeless, these other rappers are just mindless
I keep going at it even after they’re left rhymeless
Classic, like the techniques that I rap with
I survived with skill, and my luck make you look hapless
And I still got the power of will, forever improving my skill
When I move in for the kill, I make you look like you’re mentally ill
Infused with life in both coasts, I’m a prodigy
But in the past, I both gave and accepted apologies
It’s no easy task, comin up like this
And just call up and ask if you wanna know who writes this
It’s all from my heart, baby fresh frtom my mind
I know what it’s like to be torn apart or have others be kind
I’m changed for the better, in the past I was blind
Just like these letters, now they’re one of a kind
They used to be generic, like any other street kid
Now they’re inspiring, like to me what the beat did
My style is impetuous, I’ll leave you incredulous
With a smile, I’ll tell you why I’m attached to this
I’m calm, usually, but get at me and I’ll get at you brutally
The way I handle things, I bet you can tell that this ain’t new to me
Yall need to stop ganging up on me becauze i just cant be beat....

Dont cough now
cause ur rap is shit
sit down fool and
snort some shit
First str dude is actin like hes the shit
but than again Jinrake think he owns like hes on some shit
1,2,3,4 i Make u mercify out ur door Now get on ur knees
Open ur mouth
close ur eyes you'll be sanatized
Once this shit is over u will be like holy fucken shit that was nice!
U playa haters out there thinkin ur the cake
but ur only some meat on that Hamburger at bk!
Now Now listen up *cough*cough*U must think that u the shizzle
the fuck u on u aint on shizzle
Str dude thinkin he looks fly but hes the only 1 thats lookin like he snorted some of that shit
Cmon str and jin, I wanna have some competition
This battle ain't worth it im outty but for all u niggas out there
U some fries at mccdonalds oily gressy and fucked up!

This is mine!@!

Hi im Dante.

I swear to fucking god
why does everyone like rap
why r we even rapping here
if this is RSPS
so if you wanna rap
go take to some other shitty forums
or make into offtopic
gtfo bros

lmao nicee

Now don't think I won't hit ya 'cause I'm popular
I got a P90 Ruger, gonna pop at ya
Catch ya slippin', I'mma give ya what I got for ya
My clip loaded with 16 shots for ya
You never had a hot gun on your waste and blood on your shoe
'Cause a lady wont and said the wrong shit to you
Homie you ain't been through, what I been through
You not like me and I'm not like you
I'm like an animal with it when I spit it, it's crazy
Got semi-autos and put holes in niggas tryna play me
One shot is not enough, you need at least an uzi to move me
After four bottles of "Don," the kid start feelin' woozie
I write my life, you write what you see in gangsta movies
I'm gangsta to the core, nigga you can't move me
I find my space at the top
I got this rap shit locked
I never heard of you, you heard of me
I murder you, spit shells at your convertible
Lotus, you notice
Rich or poor, hollows still go through your door
This is war
You scared of me, you not prepared for me
The kid is back, Grape yea
I know you like that,

lol phat dude ur a dumbass that is from john cena's rap...